My apology for not delivering this blog post on time.
I strongly believe that environment needs not be sacrificed for economic growth. Being an environmental engineering undergraduate, it’s my responsibility to help business to minimize their impact on the environment, as well as to create a sustainable energy future. My expertise in pollution management and biofuel will help Shell to achieve its goal of responsible energy. The missions would be challenging. However, they are also what excite me to strive harder.
Where is it?
ReplyDeleteMrs Richardson
Hi See Hon,
ReplyDeleteExcellent biodata! All the requirements needed to work in Shell are highlighted. I think that the introduction can be made with a stronger impact by saying: “Environment must not be surrendered for economic growth --- that’s what I strongly believe.”
The second sentence can be improved by saying: “Responsibilities in helping to minimize the damage caused to the environment in business scale and creating a sustainable energy future is imparted in me as an Environmental Engineering undergraduate.”
The third sentence can add more weight by saying: “X years’ experience in pollution management and biofuel exactly maps Shell’s goal of responsible energy.”
The ending can be made more powerful by saying: “The ever changing mission is what stimulates me to strive harder.”
First line: the environment need not be sacrificed.
ReplyDeleteWhat are these missions you mention?
I think as a short opening to your resume (Shell bound) it's quite good.
Mrs Richardson